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Post by Guest on Sat Sep 15, 2012 7:18 pm

Well I am writing a chapter book so I will share a little bit of that and also I will put on some of my drawings. Very Happy

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Post by Guest on Sat Sep 15, 2012 7:22 pm

Here's some of my book:

The golden sun beamed brightly in the blue sky. The day was hot. The crystal clear water of the river was cool and refreshing as it swam around Olives body. The occasional salmon would swim freely past. Dragonflies drifted around the rivers waters in scattered groups. Reeds edged the river growing between large, smooth rocks. Olive was sitting in one of the rivers deeper pools enjoying the cool sensation the rivers water offered. She had been relaxing in the water for quite some time under the shade of an overhanging willow. I should probably go and do something useful like go and collect berries,thought Olive.But then again I could stay here a little longer. She overcame her desire to do nothing, unlike the last ten times, and stood up. Multiple water droplets rushed of her skin and danced back to the river. Olive waded through the water, pebbles rolling underfoot, and through the thick tall, reeds. She stepped onto the sandy bank. Her clothes were soaked and her long, golden hair was dripping.

That is part of my chapter book.

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Post by Guest on Sat Sep 15, 2012 10:02 pm

I like it Razz

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Post by Guest on Sat Sep 15, 2012 11:17 pm

Thanks

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Post by Guest on Sun Sep 16, 2012 2:02 pm

You're welcome.

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Post by FlickStar on Tue Sep 18, 2012 10:54 pm

I love it. Very descriptive, helps to create a picture in your mind. :3

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Post by Guest on Wed Sep 19, 2012 3:03 am

Thanks Smile

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Post by FlickStar on Wed Sep 19, 2012 3:04 am

No prob. x3

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